Once there was a poor and generous old man from Ballaghaderreen who has a dream. In it he is told to make a journey at the end of which he will find a pot of gold. In this case the old man has to leave Balla and travel a good way to Dublin and there, when he crosses one of the bridges over the River Liffy, he will find a pub, and there he will find his treasure.
The old man follows the dream map and when he sees the pub that was in his dream he looks around but there's no place he can dig for a hidden treasure, so he stands beside the door and waits. He waits all day and at nightfall the publican comes out and asks,
"What are you standing here for all day long?"
"I had a dream that told me to come here."
"A dream? I think you must be a daft old man to follow dreams. I, myself, had a dream a month ago and it told me to go to some poor old sod's cottage on the crossroads from French Park to Ballaghaderreen and if I did, I would find a pot of gold in his front yard. Do you think I would go traipsing all over the countryside because of a dream? It's cold. You should go home."
"Indeed I should and will," said the old man.
And when he got home he dug in his front yard and found the treasure and wasn't he himself and all the others the better for it.
And if he hasn't given it all away we might share a bit with them.
10.27.2013
10.21.2013
The Radical Priest on Luke 18:1-8
(Parable of the Persistent Widow)
Now most of
my brethren
will preach
that the lesson of
the text is
to be persistent in prayer.
To pray unceasingly
as St. Paul puts it.
However,
the problem I
have with this
message is
by extension
the unjust judge
is God.
Whom we
can badger
anything out of
Him
if we are
relentless in
our petitions.
Allow me
to turn the tables
on this parable.
God is the
widow.
Constantly
pleading
to the point of
being pushy
to get us
to see His way
is the best way.
And I can see
by the look in
some of your eyes
you sense
the implications
of this.
WE ARE THE UNJUST JUDGE!
Do we
don't care
what God thinks?
Do we
ignore
what God is pleading with
us about?
Do we worry
about
God upsetting
our apple cart
or worse?
(Aside: I never before noticed
in the text
that judge was afraid
of physical harm
by his continual
rejecting of her claims.)
So the
message I have for
you this
Sabbath
is this:
Yes,
be faithful in prayer.
Pray in the Spirit.
Pray in love and truth
and unceasingly.
But also
listen to
and contemplate
on the Father's
continual
prayers for you.
Now most of
my brethren
will preach
that the lesson of
the text is
to be persistent in prayer.
To pray unceasingly
as St. Paul puts it.
However,
the problem I
have with this
message is
by extension
the unjust judge
is God.
Whom we
can badger
anything out of
Him
if we are
relentless in
our petitions.
Allow me
to turn the tables
on this parable.
God is the
widow.
Constantly
pleading
to the point of
being pushy
to get us
to see His way
is the best way.
And I can see
by the look in
some of your eyes
you sense
the implications
of this.
WE ARE THE UNJUST JUDGE!
Do we
don't care
what God thinks?
Do we
ignore
what God is pleading with
us about?
Do we worry
about
God upsetting
our apple cart
or worse?
(Aside: I never before noticed
in the text
that judge was afraid
of physical harm
by his continual
rejecting of her claims.)
So the
message I have for
you this
Sabbath
is this:
Yes,
be faithful in prayer.
Pray in the Spirit.
Pray in love and truth
and unceasingly.
But also
listen to
and contemplate
on the Father's
continual
prayers for you.
Buddha on Matthew 6:25-34
An old farmer went to the Buddha
seeking help for his problems.
First, he had professional problems.
In his part of the world,
farming was extremely difficult
and his work completely vulnerable to weather.
Even though he loved his wife,
there were certain things
about her he wanted to change.
Similarly, he loved his children,
but they weren’t evolving
the way he had hoped and anticipated.
Listening carefully
as the man explained his frustrations with life,
the Buddha responded,
“I’m sorry, but I can’t help you.”
“What do you mean?”
questioned the farmer.
“You’re a highly regarded great teacher
who has insight into all of life’s problems.”
“All human beings have eighty-three problems,”
the Buddha explained.
“A few problems may go away,
but soon enough others will arise.
So we’ll always have eighty-three problems.”
The farmer, both indignant and frustrated, asked,
“So what good is all of your teaching?”
To which the Buddha replied,
“My teaching can’t help with the eighty-three problems,
but perhaps it can help with the eighty-fourth problem.”
“What’s that?” the farmer asked with great curiosity.
“The eighty-fourth problem is that
we don’t want to have any problems.”
“Hallowed be”
(a meditation on each word(s)
of the Lord's prayer)
of the Lord's prayer)
I
Lord,
when I'm in a
church
that is in
more awe
of the preacher
than You,
I believe
I hear them
pray:
“...hollowed be thy Name”
II
The Beauty of His Holiness
You are
holy.
Compassionate before a person sins,
Compassionate after a person has sinned,
and
mighty in compassion
to give all creatures according to their need.
Merciful, that humankind may not be distressed;
Gracious if humankind is already in distress.
You are
slow to anger;
plenteous in mercy;
speaking in truth;
keeping mercy unto thousands;
forgiving
iniquity;
transgression;
and sin;
and pardoning
because
You are
holy.
10.13.2013
"in Heaven"
(a meditation on each word(s) of the Lord's prayer)
Your eternal address.
You
once sublet
the place
to that
nice couple
You created.
Unfortunately,
You had to
evict them
because they
broke
the
Lease.
And for
a long time
you let
the place go vacant.
Then
You decided
to
advertise
Kingdom Properties.
First
the prophets.
Then
Your Son.
Telling
all who
would listen
about
the new terms
of the Lease. 1
And revealing to people
the new name of the estate --
Graceland.
Note 1 - John 1:17
"Who Art"
(a meditation on each word(s) of the Lord's prayer)
I
A Mystery.
All
of the modern
versions of
the Book
have dropped
this line,
so why
do we pray
as if
Jesus
proclaimed
the Good News
in
Old English?
II
Jehovah-Shammah
"You are"
Jesus insists.
No ancestor
worship
of
Abraham,
Isaac,
and Jacob.
You
are
the God
of the living.
You are
Presence.
Benediction
Rabindranath Tagore
Bless this little heart,
this white soul that has won the kiss of
heaven for our earth.
He loves the light of the sun,
he loves the sight of his
mother's face.
He has not learned to despise the dust,
and to hanker after gold.
Clasp him to your heart and bless him.
He has come into this land of an hundred cross-roads.
I know not how he chose you from the crowd, came to your door,
and grasped your hand to ask his way.
He will follow you, laughing while talking,
and not a doubt in his heart.
Keep his trust, lead him straight and bless him.
Lay your hand on his head, and pray that though the waves
underneath grow threatening, yet the breath from above may come
and fill his sails and waft him to the heaven of peace.
Forget him not in your hurry,
let him come to your heart and
bless him.
10.06.2013
Father
(meditation on each word(s) of the Lord's prayer)
You love us
unconditionally.
You desire
relationship.
Yet,
You allow us to wander
away.
No Amber alert.
No pictures on a milk carton.
Just
the confidence
that Your children will
repent their sins
and understand
there is no place like Home.
Meal Blessing
(From a prayer book)
Blessed are you, Father
who gives us
our daily bread.
Blessed is your only begotten Son,
who continually feeds us
with the word of life.
Blessed is the Holy Spirit,
who brings us together
at this table of love.
Blessed be God
now and forever.
Amen.
9.30.2013
Avarice and Usury and Precaution
When the accumulation of wealth
is no longer of high social importance,
there will be great changes in the code of morals.
We shall be able to rid ourselves
of many of the pseudo-moral principles
which have hag-ridden us for two hundred years,
by which we have exalted
some of the most distasteful of human qualities
into the position of the highest virtues.
We shall be able to afford
to dare to assess the money-motive
at its true value.
The love of money as a possession —
as distinguished from the love of money
as a means to the enjoyments and realities of life —
will be recognized for what it is,
a somewhat disgusting morbidity,
one of those semi-criminal,
semi-pathological propensities
which one hands over with a shudder
to the specialists in mental disease.
But beware!
The time for all this is not yet.
For at least another hundred years
we must pretend to ourselves
and to everyone
that fair is foul
and foul is fair;
for foul is useful and fair is not.
Avarice and usury and precaution
must be our gods for a little longer still.
For only they can lead us out of the tunnel of economic necessity into daylight.
John Maynard Keynes (1931)
The Radical Priest on Luke 16:19-31
Sometimes,
when I think of the afterlife
the question I have is:
“Will it be much different than now?”
(In other words: on earth as it is heaven (really?))
Consider this as
we read this parable of the
one percenter.
Does his world view change
with fires of Hades
lapping him?
To start, he still treats
those in power
with respect.
(Father Abraham)
And as usual,
the conversation
of the powerful turns to
how the 99ers can do their will.
(Send Lazarus to cool my tongue)
Next, there we hear
of a chasm.
Except the tables are turned.
The earthly who
amassed and stockpiled
the gains of the economy
and separated themselves
from the rest of society
now live in a gated community
that eternally faces an abyss.
(A physical and spiritual one)
And the last aspect of
this parable is the benefit
of those who have
power and influence:
inside information.
He pleads with
Father Abraham
to let his family know
to tell them
his story
of Breaking Bad
by sending Lazarus.
And Abraham
tells him,
“They just need to listen
to Moses and the Prophets.
They told the truth."
And the Patriarch concludes:
"Anyway, remember
where you came from!
Do you really think
Lazarus would be able to
ring your door bell?"
The Powwow at the End of the World
BY SHERMAN ALEXIE
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after an Indian woman puts her shoulder to the Grand Coulee Dam
and topples it.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after the floodwaters burst each successive dam
downriver from the Grand Coulee.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after the floodwaters find their way to the mouth of the Columbia River
as it enters the Pacific and causes all of it to rise.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after the first drop of floodwater is swallowed
by that salmon waiting in the Pacific.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after that salmon swims upstream, through the mouth of the Columbia
and then past the flooded cities, broken dams and abandoned reactors
of Hanford.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after that salmon swims through the mouth of the Spokane River
as it meets the Columbia, then upstream, until it arrives
in the shallows of a secret bay on the reservation where I wait alone.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after that salmon leaps into the night air above the water, throws
a lightning bolt at the brush near my feet, and starts the fire
which will lead all of the lost Indians home.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
after we Indians have gathered around the fire with that salmon
who has three stories it must tell before sunrise:
one story will teach us how to pray;
another story will make us laugh for hours;
the third story will give us reason to dance.
I am told by many of you that I must forgive and so I shall
when I am dancing with my tribe
during the powwow at the end of the world.
9.22.2013
A Sham Argument
Someone will say: "You have faith, I have works." (Vs 18)
This unidentified person
has wasted so much time
for Christians.
Debating whether
the gift of
eternal life rests on
faith,
works,
or both.
Yes,
God grants
all who believe
in the saving power
of the Cross
and Resurrection
eternal life.
But
Jesus gives
to all
who are
born from above,
born again,
saved,
slain in the Lamb
another gift.
The gift of the Holy Spirit.
And that gift
working
in a transformed life
will be evidence of
those who
will receive the
reward of
eternal life.
The sola fide
people
give the impression
that works
are a
checklist to go to heaven.
Instead, it is
God
(in the third person of the Trinity)
working
through
your weaknesses
so you
can do His will
on earth.
The works alone assembly
(a much smaller crowd)
work on their projects
as if they were going submit
their resume
to the Almighty.
All this talk
of work
and deeds
is making me tired.
Lord,
Thank you for
Your yoke is light.
Walk with me
the rest of
my days
as I do Your will.
Today on earth
and for eternity
in Paradise. Amen.
“The Vacation”
Wendell Berry
Once there was a man who filmed his vacation.
He went flying down the river in his boat
with his video camera to his eye, making
a moving picture of the moving river
upon which his sleek boat moved swiftly
toward the end of his vacation. He showed
his vacation to his camera, which pictured it,
preserving it forever: the river, the trees,
the sky, the light, the bow of his rushing boat
behind which he stood with his camera
preserving his vacation even as he was having it
so that after he had had it he would still
have it. It would be there. With a flick
of a switch, there it would be. But he
would not be in it. He would never be in it.
9.21.2013
That’s what Easter’s all about, Charlie Brown.
Believing in the resurrection
does not just mean
assenting to a dogma
and noting a historical fact.
It means participating
in God’s
creative act.
If it were merely
a historical circumstance,
we should simply say:
‘Oh really?’,
register the fact,
and go on living
as we did before.
But if it is a creative act of God’s, then –
if we really know and understand
what it is about –
we shall be born again to a new life.
A faith like this is the beginning of freedom
Resurrection is not a consoling opium,
soothing us
with the promise of a better world
in the hereafter.
It is the energy
for a rebirth
of this life.
The hope doesn’t point to another world.
It is focused on the redemption of this one.
Jurgen Moltmann (Jesus Christ for Today’s World)
The Cast of Christmas Reassembles For Easter
Take the wise men to the Emperor's palace.
Wash their hands in water.
Get them to say something about truth.
Does anyone know any good Jewish jokes?
The one about a carpenter
who thought he was a King?
The one about the Savior
who couldn't save himself?
The shepherds should stand with the chorus.
They have a big production number -
'Barabbas, We Love You Baby'.
Mary? She can move to the front.
We have a special section reserved
for family and close friends.
Tell her that we had to cut the manger up.
We needed the wood for something else.
The star I'm afraid I can't use.
There are no stars in this show.
The sky turns black with sorrow.
The earth shakes with terror.
Hold on to the frankincense.
We'll need that for the garden scene.
Angels? He could do with some angels.
Avenging angels.
Merciful angels.
He could really do with some angels.
Baby Jesus.
Step this way please.
My! How you've grown!
**Steve Turner
A blessing for one who holds power
May the gift of leadership awaken in you as a vocation,
Keep you mindful of the providence that calls you to serve.
As high over the mountains the eagle spreads its wings,
May your perspective be larger than the view from the foothills.
When the way is flat and dull in times of grey endurance,
May your imagination continue to evoke horizons.
When thirst burns in times of drought,
May you be blessed to find the wells.
May you have the wisdom to read time clearly
And to know when the seed of change will flourish.
In your heart may there be sanctuary
for the stillness where clarity is born.
May your work be infused with passion and creativity
And have the wisdom to balance compassion and challenge.
May your soul find the graciousness
To rise above the fester of small mediocrities.
May your power never become a shell
wherein your heart would silently atrophy.
May you welcome your own vulnerability
as the ground where healing and truth join.
May the integrity of soul be your first ideal,
the source that will guide and bless your work.
John O'Donohue, Benedictus, a Book of Blessings.
Keep you mindful of the providence that calls you to serve.
As high over the mountains the eagle spreads its wings,
May your perspective be larger than the view from the foothills.
When the way is flat and dull in times of grey endurance,
May your imagination continue to evoke horizons.
When thirst burns in times of drought,
May you be blessed to find the wells.
May you have the wisdom to read time clearly
And to know when the seed of change will flourish.
In your heart may there be sanctuary
for the stillness where clarity is born.
May your work be infused with passion and creativity
And have the wisdom to balance compassion and challenge.
May your soul find the graciousness
To rise above the fester of small mediocrities.
May your power never become a shell
wherein your heart would silently atrophy.
May you welcome your own vulnerability
as the ground where healing and truth join.
May the integrity of soul be your first ideal,
the source that will guide and bless your work.
John O'Donohue, Benedictus, a Book of Blessings.
9.18.2013
Batter my heart (Holy Sonnet 14)
Batter my heart, three-person'd God; for you
As yet but knock, breathe, shine, and seek to mend;
That I may rise, and stand, o'erthrow me, and bend
Your force, to break, blow, burn, and make me new.
I, like an usurp'd town, to another due,
Labour to admit you, but O, to no end.
Reason, your viceroy in me, me should defend,
But is captived, and proves weak or untrue.
Yet dearly I love you, and would be loved fain,
But am betroth'd unto your enemy;
Divorce me, untie, or break that knot again,
Take me to you, imprison me, for I,
Except you enthrall me, never shall be free,
Nor ever chaste, except you ravish me.
**John Donne
Grimalkin by Thomas Lynch
One of these days she will lie there and be dead.
I’ll take her out back in a garbage bag
and bury her among my sons’ canaries,
the ill-fated turtles, a pair of angelfish:
the tragic and mannerly household pests
that had the better sense to take their leaves
before their welcomes and my patience had worn thin.
For twelve long years I’ve suffered this damned cat
while Mike, my darling middle son, himself
twelve years this coming May, has grown into
the tender if quick-tempered manchild
his breeding blessed and cursed him to become.
And only his affection keeps this cat alive
though more than once I’ve threatened violence -
the brick and burlap in the river recompense
for mounds of furballs littering the house,
choking the vacuum cleaner, or what’s worse:
shit in the closets, piss in the planters, mice
that winter indoors safely as she sleeps
curled about a table leg, vigilant
as any knickknack in a partial coma.
But Mike, of course, is blind to all of it -
the gray angora breed of arrogance,
the sluttish roar, the way she disappears for days
sex-desperate once or twice a year,
urgently ripping her way out the screen door
to have her way with anything that moves
while Mike sits up with tuna fish and worry,
crying into the darkness, “Here kitty kitty,”
mindless of her whorish treacheries
or of her crimes against upholsteries -
the sofas, love seats, wingbacks, easy chairs
she’s puked and mauled into dilapidation.
I have this reoccurring dream of driving her
deep into the desert east of town
and dumping her out there with a few days’ feed
and water. In the dream, she’s always found
by kindly tribespeople who eat her kind
on certain holy days as a form of penance.
God knows, I don’t know what he sees in her.
Sometimes he holds her like a child in his arms
rubbing her underside until she sounds
like one of those battery powered vibrators
folks claim to use for the ache in their shoulders.
And under Mike’s protection she will fix her
indolent green-eyed gaze on me as if
to say: Whaddaya gonna do about it, Slick,
the child loves me and you love the child.
Truth told, I really ought to have her fixed
in the old way with an airtight alibi,
a bag of Redi-mix and no eyewitnesses.
But one of these days she will lie there and be dead.
And choking back loud hallelujahs, I’ll pretend
a brief bereavement for my Michael’s sake,
letting him think as he has often said
“Deep down inside you really love her don’t you Dad?”
I’ll even hold some cheerful obsequies
careful to observe God’s never-failing care
for even these, the least of His creatures,
making some mention of a cat-heaven where
cat-ashes to ashes, cat-dust to dust
and the Lord gives and the Lord has taken away.
Thus claiming my innocence to the end,
I’ll turn Mike homeward from that wicked little grave
and if he asks, we’ll get another one because
all boys need practice in the arts of love
and all boys’ aging fathers in the arts of rage.
I’ll take her out back in a garbage bag
and bury her among my sons’ canaries,
the ill-fated turtles, a pair of angelfish:
the tragic and mannerly household pests
that had the better sense to take their leaves
before their welcomes and my patience had worn thin.
For twelve long years I’ve suffered this damned cat
while Mike, my darling middle son, himself
twelve years this coming May, has grown into
the tender if quick-tempered manchild
his breeding blessed and cursed him to become.
And only his affection keeps this cat alive
though more than once I’ve threatened violence -
the brick and burlap in the river recompense
for mounds of furballs littering the house,
choking the vacuum cleaner, or what’s worse:
shit in the closets, piss in the planters, mice
that winter indoors safely as she sleeps
curled about a table leg, vigilant
as any knickknack in a partial coma.
But Mike, of course, is blind to all of it -
the gray angora breed of arrogance,
the sluttish roar, the way she disappears for days
sex-desperate once or twice a year,
urgently ripping her way out the screen door
to have her way with anything that moves
while Mike sits up with tuna fish and worry,
crying into the darkness, “Here kitty kitty,”
mindless of her whorish treacheries
or of her crimes against upholsteries -
the sofas, love seats, wingbacks, easy chairs
she’s puked and mauled into dilapidation.
I have this reoccurring dream of driving her
deep into the desert east of town
and dumping her out there with a few days’ feed
and water. In the dream, she’s always found
by kindly tribespeople who eat her kind
on certain holy days as a form of penance.
God knows, I don’t know what he sees in her.
Sometimes he holds her like a child in his arms
rubbing her underside until she sounds
like one of those battery powered vibrators
folks claim to use for the ache in their shoulders.
And under Mike’s protection she will fix her
indolent green-eyed gaze on me as if
to say: Whaddaya gonna do about it, Slick,
the child loves me and you love the child.
Truth told, I really ought to have her fixed
in the old way with an airtight alibi,
a bag of Redi-mix and no eyewitnesses.
But one of these days she will lie there and be dead.
And choking back loud hallelujahs, I’ll pretend
a brief bereavement for my Michael’s sake,
letting him think as he has often said
“Deep down inside you really love her don’t you Dad?”
I’ll even hold some cheerful obsequies
careful to observe God’s never-failing care
for even these, the least of His creatures,
making some mention of a cat-heaven where
cat-ashes to ashes, cat-dust to dust
and the Lord gives and the Lord has taken away.
Thus claiming my innocence to the end,
I’ll turn Mike homeward from that wicked little grave
and if he asks, we’ll get another one because
all boys need practice in the arts of love
and all boys’ aging fathers in the arts of rage.
Love Is Not All
Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink
Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain;
Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
Love can not fill the thickened lung with breath,
Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
Yet many a man is making friends with death
Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
It well may be that in a difficult hour,
Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
Or nagged by want past resolution's power,
I might be driven to sell your love for peace,
Or trade the memory of this night for food.
It well may be. I do not think I would.
Edna St. Vincent Millay
First Shot
Michael Leviton
When I was four years old,
my mother took me for my first shot.
We waited in a line
of sobbing children,
asking their mothers,
“Will it hurt? Will it hurt?”
The mothers all said,
“No, it won’t hurt.”
I asked my mother, “Will it hurt?”
She said, “It’ll hurt a little
but it won’t last very long.”
When it came time for my shot,
I didn’t cry.
The nurse told my mother,
she’d never given a shot to a child
who wasn’t crying,
that I was the bravest child
she’d ever seen.
My mother said it wasn’t about bravery,
that the other children weren’t
crying out of fear,
but out of sorrow
at the betrayal of their mothers.
9.15.2013
Marked by Ashes
Ruler of the Night, Guarantor of the day . . .
This day — a gift from you.
This day — like none other you have ever given, or we have ever received.
This Wednesday dazzles us with gift and newness and possibility.
This Wednesday burdens us with the tasks of the day, for we are already halfway home
halfway back to committees and memos,
halfway back to calls and appointments,
halfway on to next Sunday,
halfway back, half frazzled, half expectant,
half turned toward you, half rather not.
This Wednesday is a long way from Ash Wednesday,
but all our Wednesdays are marked by ashes —
we begin this day with that taste of ash in our mouth:
of failed hope and broken promises,
of forgotten children and frightened women,
we ourselves are ashes to ashes, dust to dust;
we can taste our mortality as we roll the ash around on our tongues.
We are able to ponder our ashness with
some confidence, only because our every Wednesday of ashes
anticipates your Easter victory over that dry, flaky taste of death.
On this Wednesday, we submit our ashen way to you —
You Easter parade of newness.
Before the sun sets, take our Wednesday and Easter us,
Easter us to joy and energy and courage and freedom;
Easter us that we may be fearless for your truth.
Come here and Easter our Wednesday with
mercy and justice and peace and generosity.
We pray as we wait for the Risen One who comes soon.
Walter Brueggemann (b. 1933)
Taken from his Prayers for a Privileged People (Nashville: Abingdon, 2008), pp. 27-28.
Desert Prayer
Jan Richardson- Painted Prayerbook.com
I am not asking you
to take this wilderness from me,
to remove this place of starkness
where I come to know
the wildness within me,
where I learn to call the names
of the ravenous beasts
that pace inside me,
to finger the brambles
that snake through my veins,
to taste the thirst
that tugs at my tongue.
But send me
tough angels,
sweet wine,
strong bread:
just enough.
American Christmas Card 2004
I met a man in Nigeria years ago,
an Ibo,
who said he had three hundred relatives
he knew by name.
His wife had just had a baby.
They were going to take it
on foot
to be welcomed and marveled at
by as many of those relatives
as they could find,
even though
there was a war going on.
Wouldn’t you love to have been
such a famous baby?
I wish I could wave a magic wand
this Christmas,
and give every desperately lonesome
and hungry and lost American
man, woman, or child
the love and comfort and support
of an extended family.
Just two people and a babe in the manger,
given a heartless Government,
is no survival scheme.
Kurt Vonnegut
Editing Job
Carl Dennis
I'd cut the prologue, where God agrees
To let his opponent, Satan,
Torment our hero merely to prove
What omniscience must know already:
That Job's devotion isn't dependent
On his prosperity. And how foolish of God
If he supposes that Satan, once proven wrong,
Will agree to forego his spite against creation
For even a minute.
I'd keep the part where Job disdains
His friends' assumption that somehow
He must be to blame for his suffering,
And the part where he makes a moving appeal
To God for an explanation.
I'd drop God's irrelevant, angry tirade
About might and majesty versus weakness.
The issue is justice. Is our hero
Impertinent for expecting his god
To practice justice as well as preach it,
For assuming the definition of justice
That holds on earth holds as well above?
Abraham isn't reproved in Genesis
For asking, when God decides to burn Sodom,
If it's fair to lump the good with the wicked.
Let Job be allowed to complain
About his treatment as long as he wants to,
For months, for decades,
And in this way secure his place forever
In the hearts of all who believe
That suffering shouldn't be silent,
That grievances ought to be aired completely,
Whether heard or not.
As for the end, if it's meant to suggest
That patience will be rewarded, I'd cut it too.
Or else I suggest at least adding a passage
Where God, after replenishing Job's possessions,
Comes to the tent where the man sits grieving
To ask his pardon. How foolish of majesty
To have assumed that Job's new family,
New wife and children and servants,
Would be an ample substitute for the old.
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